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TrabajoFinal: Ejemplar
{Nota: B+. Comentarios del profesor: While I enjoyed reading your paper and think it is very strong, it exhibits several weaknesses that detract from its overall effectiveness. One is the thesis statement, which does a good job of orienting the reader but doesn’t exactly capture the essence of the paper’s argument. Another is that you don’t provide enough support for your argument with direct quotes from the novel. On the other hand, your discussion of Plato’s Allegory along with the source that you use to offer insight on it and on its continuing relevance is very effective. While your control of written Spanish continues to show improvement, the frequency of grammatical errors in this paper is relatively high for this level. I encourage you to continue reviewing grammar over the summer in tandem with reading in Spanish. Doing this, I believe, will put you on solid ground to have a positive experience with Senior I.S. in the fall.}